I'm dabbling a bit in playwriting...

It's true. I've always been interested in theatre (I've been in the school play for who knows how long), and there are some experiences in my life that could definitely be turned into pieces of theatre.

I've already started on my first play, which will be called "Pretend It's There" (although I may never finish it due to time constraints. Still, it's worth a shot.)

You can preview two scenes here, although they're mainly filler ones. You may recognize a name or two for characters or products...

http://www.stageplays-forum.com/forum6/3684.html

http://www.stageplays-forum.com/forum6/3797.html

wow man great job

It's good, but needs a few touches up. I think the guys on the forum have already pretty much stated what needed to be changed. You don't need Patrick to say it's his, he just needs to look at it, probably embarrassed by the way the dialogue is written. A few bits need to be shortened down, but do that once you've gotten through to finishing the whole script.