| | Act II, Scene 5 Posted) |  |
|
+5Tanrar kensethfan Jrod Chives5150 VincentGiac426 9 posters |
|
| Author | Message |
|---|
Chives5150
World Racing Legend
Posts : 1636
Join date : 2011-07-10
Location : Texas
| Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted)  Thu Aug 18, 2011 11:12 pm | |
| It keeps escalating...can't wait to see what happens next. You're pretty good with cliffhangers. | |
|
| | |
Jesse Pizzajarvi
Admin
Posts : 4133
Join date : 2010-09-02
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Thu Aug 18, 2011 11:18 pm | |
| One adjective: Fantastic. | |
|
| | |
DLeck6211
World Racing Legend
Posts : 3618
Join date : 2010-03-01
Age : 35
Location : Burger King
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Thu Aug 18, 2011 11:24 pm | |
| - Chives5150 wrote:
- It keeps escalating...can't wait to see what happens next. You're pretty good with cliffhangers.
Vinny is the next M. Night Shamlylan (spelling fail) WHAT A TWEEST! | |
|
| | |
Chives5150
World Racing Legend
Posts : 1636
Join date : 2011-07-10
Location : Texas
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Thu Aug 18, 2011 11:28 pm | |
| - NavyCook75 wrote:
- Chives5150 wrote:
- It keeps escalating...can't wait to see what happens next. You're pretty good with cliffhangers.
Vinny is the next M. Night Shamlylan (spelling fail)
WHAT A TWEEST! Maybe Vinny can write a better "The Last Airbender" movie than M. Night.  | |
|
| | |
DLeck6211
World Racing Legend
Posts : 3618
Join date : 2010-03-01
Age : 35
Location : Burger King
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Thu Aug 18, 2011 11:37 pm | |
| - Chives5150 wrote:
- NavyCook75 wrote:
- Chives5150 wrote:
- It keeps escalating...can't wait to see what happens next. You're pretty good with cliffhangers.
Vinny is the next M. Night Shamlylan (spelling fail)
WHAT A TWEEST! Maybe Vinny can write a better "The Last Airbender" movie than M. Night. I can't imagine..... | |
|
| | |
VincentGiac426
Admin
Posts : 2363
Join date : 2009-05-30
Age : 30
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Thu Aug 18, 2011 11:57 pm | |
|
Last edited by AAROdynamic426 on Thu Sep 15, 2011 7:37 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
|
| | |
Guest
Guest
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Fri Aug 19, 2011 12:26 pm | |
| This whole thing is good. I've read a bit of it (I don't like reading long pieces like this, no offense xD) |
|
| | |
VincentGiac426
Admin
Posts : 2363
Join date : 2009-05-30
Age : 30
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Sat Aug 20, 2011 1:12 am | |
|
Last edited by AAROdynamic426 on Tue Aug 23, 2011 12:38 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
|
| | |
Mr. Dr. Professor Mech
World Racing Legend
Posts : 1328
Join date : 2010-12-07
Age : 29
Location : In a awesome world. Where money is based on chocolate and pancakes!
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Sat Aug 20, 2011 1:15 am | |
| Hey Vinneh, do you have a problem with me making a book version of this play? It doesn't have to go on FictionPress if you don't want it to.. | |
|
| | |
DLeck6211
World Racing Legend
Posts : 3618
Join date : 2010-03-01
Age : 35
Location : Burger King
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Sat Aug 20, 2011 1:16 am | |
| - AAROdynamic426 wrote:
- Gotz a speshul treet for youz tonight:
TWO SCENES!!!!
good, I need something to help me sleep! all kidding aside, I'll look at it in the morning..... | |
|
| | |
VincentGiac426
Admin
Posts : 2363
Join date : 2009-05-30
Age : 30
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Sat Aug 20, 2011 1:16 am | |
| - Mr. Mech wrote:
- Hey Vinneh, do you have a problem with me making a book version of this play? It doesn't have to go on FictionPress if you don't want it to..
I'd really prefer you all leave GWI-related stuff to me. Thanks anyway, though. | |
|
| | |
VincentGiac426
Admin
Posts : 2363
Join date : 2009-05-30
Age : 30
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Tue Aug 23, 2011 12:37 pm | |
|
Last edited by AAROdynamic426 on Wed Sep 07, 2011 12:05 am; edited 1 time in total | |
|
| | |
Mr. Dr. Professor Mech
World Racing Legend
Posts : 1328
Join date : 2010-12-07
Age : 29
Location : In a awesome world. Where money is based on chocolate and pancakes!
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Wed Aug 24, 2011 1:04 am | |
| - Spoiler:
SCENE 4
-I believe Owens was blacklisted a little quick.
-The note is from the Spanish judge, we can't tell.
-Kyle: Cutting Amber off? ze fawk?
-Why is Jen's name the only one with excitement? Favoritism?
-Purchase a free hot tub?
-You might want to say Kyle was looking away from Patrick or something.
SCENE 5
-I thought Amber hated guys and all that jazz?
-Misspelled care (you put car)
-Danny so likes Jen right now
-Timothy in my opinion is a little childish
-In real life, Ms.Ray would probably be a little more insistent on getting the word of the security breach through.
-Ms.Ray is way to overprotective over her children.
-Does that mean Patrick, Duncan, and Amber are expelled too?
| |
|
| | |
VincentGiac426
Admin
Posts : 2363
Join date : 2009-05-30
Age : 30
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Wed Aug 24, 2011 1:12 am | |
| - Mr. Mech wrote:
- Spoiler:
SCENE 4
-I believe Owens was blacklisted a little quick.
Yeah, I gots to work on that.
-The note is from the Spanish judge, we can't tell.
Fixed.
-Kyle: Cutting Amber off? ze fawk?
May have to fix that too.
-You might want to say Kyle was looking away from Patrick or something.
Why?
SCENE 5
-I thought Amber hated guys and all that jazz?
She never said that. In fact, her odd motivation is kinda the cause of her sluttiness.
-Misspelled care (you put car)
What sentence was this?
-Danny so likes Jen right now
It's supposed to be obvious. That's the whole thing with him.
-Timothy in my opinion is a little childish
Supposed to be that way. He's...in the special program, remember?
-Ms.Ray is way to overprotective over her children.
Once again, part of her character. Unless you think said overprotectiveness is overdone.
-Does that mean Patrick, Duncan, and Amber are expelled too?
Mrs. Ray never saw that Duncan and Amber being first ones with the files and subsequently tricking Timothy into giving them to everyone. And she's way too blind to even consider that Patrick could have done this too, so...yeah.
| |
|
| | |
Mr. Dr. Professor Mech
World Racing Legend
Posts : 1328
Join date : 2010-12-07
Age : 29
Location : In a awesome world. Where money is based on chocolate and pancakes!
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Wed Aug 24, 2011 1:16 am | |
| - AAROdynamic426 wrote:
DANNY
Well, I mean, it’s not that they’re my favorite all of a sudden, it’s just, you know, I guess you have good—(Drops the player and picks it back up. He takes quite good car of the headphones as he gives it back to her.) Ah! Oh my gosh, I’m so sorry. Here.
| |
|
| | |
VincentGiac426
Admin
Posts : 2363
Join date : 2009-05-30
Age : 30
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Tue Aug 30, 2011 1:07 pm | |
|
Last edited by AAROdynamic426 on Thu Sep 15, 2011 7:38 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
|
| | |
Mr. Dr. Professor Mech
World Racing Legend
Posts : 1328
Join date : 2010-12-07
Age : 29
Location : In a awesome world. Where money is based on chocolate and pancakes!
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Tue Aug 30, 2011 1:33 pm | |
| - Spoiler:
-Kyle, he should be more relieved than happy that he got his camera back
-"I second that motion"
"Will you quit saying that?" XD
-Is Patrick now trying to get in trouble?
-Danny is special, shocker [/notsarcasm]
| |
|
| | |
VincentGiac426
Admin
Posts : 2363
Join date : 2009-05-30
Age : 30
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Tue Aug 30, 2011 4:51 pm | |
| - Dr. Mech wrote:
- Spoiler:
-Is Patrick now trying to get in trouble? YES.
-Danny is special, shocker [/notsarcasm] Is that really not sarcasm? And he's not "special", per se, but he does have a very mild disorder.
| |
|
| | |
Mr. Dr. Professor Mech
World Racing Legend
Posts : 1328
Join date : 2010-12-07
Age : 29
Location : In a awesome world. Where money is based on chocolate and pancakes!
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Tue Aug 30, 2011 7:51 pm | |
| - AAROdynamic426 wrote:
- Dr. Mech wrote:
- Spoiler:
-Is Patrick now trying to get in trouble? YES.
-Danny is special, shocker [/notsarcasm] Is that really not sarcasm? And he's not "special", per se, but he does have a very mild disorder. That was seriously not sarcasm. Seriously.
| |
|
| | |
VincentGiac426
Admin
Posts : 2363
Join date : 2009-05-30
Age : 30
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Wed Sep 07, 2011 12:03 am | |
|
Last edited by AAROdynamic426 on Sun Sep 25, 2011 8:19 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
|
| | |
Mr. Dr. Professor Mech
World Racing Legend
Posts : 1328
Join date : 2010-12-07
Age : 29
Location : In a awesome world. Where money is based on chocolate and pancakes!
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Sat Sep 10, 2011 5:09 am | |
| - Spoiler:
Everything was fine. But illegal gel pads? ze fawk?
Other than that, there were no problems.
| |
|
| | |
VincentGiac426
Admin
Posts : 2363
Join date : 2009-05-30
Age : 30
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Thu Sep 15, 2011 7:36 pm | |
|
Last edited by AAROdynamic426 on Thu Feb 02, 2012 11:47 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
|
| | |
Mr. Dr. Professor Mech
World Racing Legend
Posts : 1328
Join date : 2010-12-07
Age : 29
Location : In a awesome world. Where money is based on chocolate and pancakes!
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Tue Sep 20, 2011 8:15 pm | |
| - Spoiler:
-The significance of June 19th? I think I revealed that too early. Don't you just love exposition? -He's not going to hurt us anymore? That's what Carol thinks...-I really hope Duncan's kidding about the killing. He meant that in a figurative sense. The same way I would say "Dad's going to kill me if my homework isn't done."-When Timmothy checked his phone, was that still the same person saying thank you? It was Patrick. And if you're referring to the part where he anxiously texts someone...you're not supposed to know who it is yet.-Why the hell was Danny counting the days? He remembers little things that way. Part of his character.-Keeps walking then stops? ze fawk? He's trying to decide whether or not to finally stand the hell up for himself for once.-Owens is blackmailing. Nice. I assume it's believable then? Did you catch the foreshadowing?
| |
|
| | |
VincentGiac426
Admin
Posts : 2363
Join date : 2009-05-30
Age : 30
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Sun Sep 25, 2011 8:12 pm | |
|
Last edited by AAROdynamic426 on Mon Oct 03, 2011 10:00 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
|
| | |
Mr. Dr. Professor Mech
World Racing Legend
Posts : 1328
Join date : 2010-12-07
Age : 29
Location : In a awesome world. Where money is based on chocolate and pancakes!
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) Tue Sep 27, 2011 10:33 pm | |
| - Spoiler:
-Since when do they have uniforms?
-This has been on my mind for the longest. How does Dominic turn to Danny?
-Sterling Currency?
-What does being allergic to Veracious have to do with anything? I mean, I know it's Jen's favorite drink and all.
-You lied! You said Duncan was kidding about killing her? Why'd he pull out a switchblade?
| |
|
| | |
Sponsored content
| | Subject: Re: Act II, Scene 5 Posted) | |
| |
|
| | |
| | Act II, Scene 5 Posted) | |
|
